Angry Letter- Rough Draft

Dear Louis Vuiton,

From tiny keychains to gorgeous handbags your company has made a great impact of style throughout the world. Hawaii is quite lucky to have this high class store located in Oahu. Tourist from all over the world come here for paradise but of course they come here for shopping. Ala Moana is one of the popular attractions for tourist to shop because the mall provides the best stores for their outragious money spending.

However I am concern about a certain incident about me and my mother. This past year my mother and I walked into your store with no the most dressiest clothes because for us it was just shopping. We walked around your store thinking we would get some help or to at least be greeted, but the staff seem to have no respect to their customers. When my mother was interested about this one bag, she needed help to get it down. Instead of doing their job of considering my mother's interest in this bag, they completely ignored her to help tourist that came after us. My mother and I were surprised by the attitude the employees gave off. So in the end, we walked out of the store with Louis Vuitton holding a bad reputation in our heads.

So I would please ask that you remind your employees the basics of how to treat people whether they're from another country or from local residents. Everyone should have the oppurnity of shopping around this mall and walking out of every store on a good note. I believe that everyone should be treated equally because this store is not only for the high-class.

Thank you for taking the time to read about my concerns and situation.

Aloha,
Daphne-Jayne Corrales